jakebe: (Fandom)
There's a bit of an ongoing kerfluffle in the furry writing community about critics of stories and the role they should play. From my admittedly limited experience with the subject, it seems like the argument has been broken down into two camps. Some folks feel that furry literature should be subjected to the same standards as any art form; critics should be able to call out bad writing wherever it might be found. Others feel that critics are useless; they'll never be happy with the quality of writing found in our humble little corner of the SF/F fandom and are really in the game to make themselves look or feel better by putting others down. After seeing some of the more vitriolic and controversial reviews out there, I have to admit that I could see why someone would think that way. But that's a problem with the critic, not criticism itself. It's important to make that distinction. Good criticism is an essential element in the growth of any art form; we need to have a way to share our opinions about where our work is at any given point, and keen eyes to point out what preoccupies us as a community, what we talk and dream about, and how well we all communicate what we're trying to say.

In case you haven't guessed, I'm for the critics. A good critic provides a valuable service to the artistic community he talks about. All art is essentially communication, and writers are trying to say something in a way that moves past language by using language extremely well. It's a difficult thing to do, especially since the combination of words that might hit us where we live might just make someone else roll their eyes. In order to be successful as a writer, we need to know the effect our writing has on someone else. We may have picked up a few tricks that navigate past the defenses of our audience, but it's by no means a sure thing. The more sophisticated our audience, the more important it becomes to use the right trick at the right time in conjunction with the right combination of other tricks. Critics can help us know whether or not our gambits have worked, and they can help us gain exposure to an audience dazzled by a multitude of choices. As writers, we want the time and attention of our readers, and critics can help us out by telling our potential readers which writers are worth paying for.

In order to do that, though, critics have to be honest, fair and respectful. Honest because any reader savvy enough to read a critique in the first place is very good at smelling bullshit in the first place; fair because it does no one any good to judge a book the same way as any other book -- each work has to be judged by its own measure; and respectful because art communities are small and fragile things, and it's far too easy to tear ourselves out of them. A good critic never tears into a work unless its creator can handle it, and the work is truly disrespectful to the time we've spent on it. I don't think there are many furry works that qualify for that, but I'm admittedly a novice when it comes to reading our fiction.

And that brings me to the next point, one that a lot of anti-critic people like to point out. We're a genre of hobbyists for the most part; we simply don't have the resources to match the quality of output of professionals. That's true. We're all hobbyists with (hopefully) day jobs, and that means we can't put the same time and effort into writing, editing and promoting furry fiction as we could if we were getting paid for it. Critics should be aware of this, and be fair about it. At the same time, it does the fiction itself a disservice if we're not trying to make it the best we can. For writers, that means refining it until we're happy with sending it out into the world. For editors and publishers, that means catching mistakes and issues that the writer may have missed, further refining the the story until it has the shine of professional work. For critics, that means telling the audience which works have been taken care of properly and which have been rushed out perhaps before they were ready. The audience gets to know what's really worth their precious attention, and the writers and editors get to know what needs to be improved on their next project.

The strive to get better at what we do extends to critics as well. I've seen far too many critics of furry fiction try to make a name for themselves by tearing down the works of others. What's worse is they do it without a sharp and critical eye. They don't actually know the craft of the writer, though they might think they do, so they end up missing a trick deployed well and focus on a difference in style. They mistake this for poor writing, and put together a slickly-produced essay with all of their best put-downs and call it a day. This isn't about the work; it's about themselves. Critics should never attempt to establish a personality cult; their attention should be on the work, and they should help their audience to make informed choices about the work. Anything else is a waste of time.

I know that most of us are in our infancy with this sort of thing. Writers coming up are still learning the tools of the trade, and what it means to be professional. Editors and publishers are learning about the tremendous workload necessary for producing a good story, making it the best that it can be. And critics are still learning how to contribute to the conversation in a meaningful way, directing audiences to the best that the fandom has to offer and telling writers and editors about gaps in their process wherever they may be found. But we're all in this together, and we all want the same thing -- for furry fiction to stand on its own as a worthy, accepted part of the greater SF/F umbrella. And we can't do that if we're trying to step on the faces of the people we should be helping to rise above the pack. A lot of critics have made this mistake, and it's left a bad reputation on this entire part of the community.

However, saying that criticism is worthless because so many of it is bad is a mistake. It's just like a reader saying that all furry fiction is worthless because they have yet to read a book that's grabbed their attention. When a critic has missed the point of a certain story, or given it an unfair review, the writer, editor or publisher is well within their rights to have a respectful, personal debate about it. The critic needs a check and balance as well, after all. His audience won't respect his opinion if it's all flash and no knowledge. Worse yet, he'll burn down the relationships with the rest of the community that he'll need in order to do his job (or his hobby) effectively.

Everyone in this process should be striving to get better at what they do, whether they're a hobbyist or have designs to make this a living. And every link of the chain should be trying to encourage every other link to strengthen themselves. I know that this hasn't been the relationship that critics have had with their counterparts in the rest of the community, but I really hope that it can be established moving forward. It'll be much harder to develop the quality of our work if we don't.

Furries!

Aug. 6th, 2009 04:31 pm
jakebe: (Default)
Though not the way you think of them.

My coworker tipped me off to them -- she's recently discovered a crippling phobia of furless animals, and like any reasonable person with a fresh scab, she just couldn't stop picking at it. So, in her travels on the internet, she ran into this:

http://www.roslynoxley9.com.au/artists/31/Patricia_Piccinini/249/34965/

It's a sculpture from an Australian artist who wanted to talk about the dangers of splicing human-animal DNA. There are other fairly disturbing images in there (including a meerkat/man, just for you [livejournal.com profile] silver_raccoon), but this seems to be the thing that draws the most attention.

The sculpture is admittedly hideous, but also fascinating. Yes, the figure is hideous, but there's something about the activity. This may be me being a giant weirdo, but it's hard to feel too negative towards a mother feeding her children. It's an unnatural creature doing this basic, natural thing. It stirs up immediate revulsion, then confusion, then a kind of sympathy, compassion, more confusion, and a weariness. Even though your initial impulse is to look away, you just can't.

I find myself looking at all the detail work; the anatomy really is very impressive. I think if furries were to *actually* exist (and I mean, furred and looking the way we draw porn of them and all), chances are we'd find a way to be dissatisfied with them. The actual experience could never match the fantasies we've built in our heads. We're in love with an idea, but if ever that idea took some sort of solid form, we'd have to find some other thing to idealize. Because that's just how we work.

I'm working on a much longer post that won't be done for a little while.
jakebe: (Zen)
I'm trying to get better about posting, I really am! But there doesn't seem to be a whole lot of time, alas. The time has perhaps come to download an LJ client to my laptop and PC, so I can type a little here or there.

Thanks for everyone's input about the bank thing! I ended up getting an account with Valley Credit Union, and they've been pretty good so far. Waiting on my checks so I can finally catch up on a few bills that are late (mostly because there's no way to pay them without a book of checks), but by the end of November I should be mostly caught up on everything and ready for Christmas shopping! Hopefully, people don't mind books, CDs and DVDs. ;)

Sunday Tube and I saw The Wild (he'll say at my request, but I will categorically deny it). It actually wasn't *terrible*, though there was a lot that was painful to watch. I'll save further comment for later review type stuff. :)

Monday was the writer's group; we watched Chicago come back from 20 points down to beat Arizona by 1 near the end of the fourth quarter. It was...impressive; I do believe the Bears are for real this season. Hopefully they won't collapse in December or anything, we'll keep our fingers crossed.

Anyway, didn't get to finish my short story on time for submitting, so I went with a few poems that fit the new fable theme instead. Most folks don't read poetry there, so again...apologies for forcing it on you. This buys me a bit of time, though, to figure out what the hell is wrong with me!

It comes down to this: I keep forgetting perspective about my writing. I'm 26 years old, and most of the people I know are a bit older than that, and have way more experience with writing short stories besides. Truth be told, I've only managed to finish three of them in my life, and I have no technique or training for it. It's going to be slow, and my stories are going to be bad. Eventually, I'll get better. I'm just not there now.

Doesn't really stop me from wanting to write like everyone else in the group. The level of quality is fairly high, and I consider myself fortunate to be in such company. It's just difficult to lower my expectations for myself right now. I'm not going to be happy with much that I write prose-wise, and perhaps I shouldn't be. I'm a novice in every sense of the word.

Tuesday we went to see a musical called Dessa Rose. It was bad. It's about the power of finding sisterhood in the pre-Civil War South. The message and plot are worthwhile, I suppose, though the material has been very thoroughly mined already. What really made the play stand out in its awfulness is the sanitized way it handled almost everything negative. Slavery came off like a mild inconvenience to most black folks, and a lot of the really bad stuff (there was a lashing, vaginal mutilation, and attempted rape, not to mention all kinds of other dehumanizing situations) was stylized away to the point of minimal impact. For all the crowing the two main characters did about the 'struggle they went through' at the beginning and end, there wasn't a real sense of struggle at all. Just stuff that happened to make Dessa tart and uppity.

This, in my opinion, does a really big disservice to the reality of what happened to black people during slavery times. If you're going to talk about it, then talk about it...don't clean it up so it doesn't offend delicate sensibilities. People, even folks who pay $30+ for tickets to a good-time musical, need to be exposed to this, need to have a proper sense of what transgressed in this country 140 years ago. I'm not saying that art should be confrontational for the sake of confrontation, but we shouldn't wrap anything harsh in spun sugar to make it go down easier. The way Dessa Rose described slavery was akin to describing rape as an "unpleasant sexual activity." Technically it's true, but it doesn't even begin to cover it.

Because anything negative was treated with kid gloves, the story about reconciliation between slave girl Dessa and lonely plantation owner Ruth came off as horribly cliched and oversimplified. The big "Hey we're all the same!" number is called (and I wish I was kidding) "White Milk, Red Blood," expressing that no matter what color a nursing mother may be, she always leaks the same kind of bodily fluids.

The whole play was preachy, treacly, and a little insulting. And I'm not just ripping it apart because I missed Peter Beagle to see it. It really was bad. :) The actors sold the material for all it was worth, though, and they did a pretty good job. They worked hard and should definitely be recognized for it.

Speaking of Peter Beagle, [livejournal.com profile] toob was nice enough to miss a lot of stuff so we could go to Berkeley and watch him speak. He read "A Dance for Emilie" from his new collection, and took a few questions from the audience. Apparently, he lives in Oakland! I am SO sending him fan mail. :D :D He was very personable and warm, and his delivery style was taken right out of vaudeville and a few notable Jewish comics. I liked him a lot!

That takes us all the way to today. I'm hoping to keep going on the short story, knock a few character descriptions out of the way, and start preparing my Christmas list for all the folks back home in Arkansas. Miss you guys. :)

There's a lot going on in national and world news, besides...Bush signed into law the Military Commissions Act, pretty much making torture legal (or at least impossible to do anything about) and just widening the memory hole that 'enemy combatants' find themselves placed into. At this point, I'm almost numb to the state of the Union; I can only hope and pray that enough people see what's going on to give Dems control of Congress in '06. It's not a permanent solution by any stretch, but it at least stems the flood of sanity that's been pouring out of this country's political scene for six years now. Honestly, it's just...discouraging. I feel pretty helpless in the face of it all. I thought I could trust the voting process, at least, but what with the rise of the Diebold machines even that's suspect. What can we do? There's all kinds of groups to join, money to throw at political action groups, charities to donate to...but none of that seems to be doing any good. People are still rabidly ignorant, uncompassionate, hostile to anyone's opinion but the ones spouted at them by television and radio. What can you do with that? It feels like our political process, our way of life, our civilization is at a breaking point. I don't mean this in an alarmist sense, but something fundamental has to change about America if we're going to get to a place that's any less broken than it is now. That's the long and short of it. I don't think the Human Rights Council or any PIRG or lobby group is going to be the source of this change, either. Whatever happens, it'll be unorganized and spontaneous. All I can do is hope it's positive.

Last, but not least, happy birthday to the suddenly disappeared [livejournal.com profile] sugerhound! If you're reading this, hope you're doing fantastically. :)

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